Quote-Revisited

Here is my original image:

 

And this is my revised image:

I changed the color of "out" from blue to red because it seemed out of place, and I decided to try to curve the text around the word "in" because Brett suggested that it might look more like a fence. I also changed the font and coloring of the second one completely because it didn't seem to fit very well with the overall mood of the quote. I also bolded certain words in the second quote because it added emphasis and an almost triangular balance to the circular quote.